Book review: ‘The Adults’ by Alison Espach

It’s hard to be a teenager, but it’s even harder for a writer to capture a teen’s voice in fiction. The unnerving adolescent habit of being worldly-wise one second and clueless the next can sound like a lack of authorial control on the page — or, worse, coy and cloying. Salinger mastered the teen voice so well by celebrating his precocious protagonists’ very instability. But he only aggravated the writer’s difficulties, since any novelist attempting Smart and Sassy Teen now has to deal with the additional risk of doing a stale Salinger impression.

Alison Espach enters this thorny thicket with her first novel, “The Adults,” and the good news is that she masters her teen’s voice exceptionally well. Emily Vidal is only 14 when she begins to narrate her coming-of-age story, but, as she brags, she has “a wildly active prefrontal cortex.” Most important, Emily is aware enough to understand how unaware she is. “The Adults” aims to pin down the elusive, in-between feeling of adolescence. “Being an adult, it seems, was horrible,” Emily muses. “But being a child was awful too, and moving from one state to the other only meant you were moving closer to death.”

At first glance, Emily’s privileged Connecticut upbringing might seem familiar. These are the quietly dysfunctional suburbs that haven’t changed all that much since Cheever. Emily’s remote father is a Lehman Brothers muckety-muck who spends his time “sequestered in the basement with a phone and a new computer that virtually connected him to any part of the world he wanted, except the upstairs of our house.” As freshmen in high school, Emily and her friends nurse crushes on boys, dissect fetal pigs, ask silly questions in sex ed and try not to think too deeply about too much. “If we had religious thoughts,” she says, “they were only worries that we would die while wearing our retainers and then have to wear them for the rest of eternity.” Emily is a fresh, funny observer of adolescent social customs, and Espach gives her high school material a likably dense, spiky texture.

Emily’s problems deepen when her parents divorce and her lonely mother starts boozing it up. Worse yet, Emily is unfortunate enough to witness the suicide of the man who lives next door. That unhappy man’s son is Emily’s best friend and romantic interest — and Emily’s father is inconveniently having an affair with the neighbor’s wife. Lastly, in case this isn’t enough in the way of complications, Emily embarks on an affair with a young teacher, despite the principal’s stern announcement that their high school has become a “Hug-Free Zone” to avoid any whiff of sexual implication.

In recounting this affair, Espach is at her best, capturing both the erotic appeal of Emily’s initiation — and her terror, along with her queasy, inchoate sense of being wronged. As Emily’s father sighs when he finally learns about the affair, “Sometimes I feel like I know exactly who you are, and sometimes, I confess, I have no idea.”

As “The Adults” moves along, Espach makes large leaps between periods in Emily’s life. This kinetic, disjointed style has been popularized by several other successful books about young adults, most notably Dave Eggers’s “A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius” and Marisha Pessl’s “Special Topics in Calamity Physics”: odd, fey chapter titles and the stray numbered list. In general, Espach makes good use of the approach, although some readers may find her style of omitting material mannered or jarring. Emily’s college years, for example, are barely mentioned, and she decides to become an interior designer without ever having shown a split second of interest in a building or object. (Actually, she sounds a lot more like someone who would major in creative writing.)

But then Espach isn’t aiming to deliver a strictly realistic, fully delineated character study. “The Adults” is less a piece of cultural anthropology than a jaunty tone poem about the indeterminate years of young adulthood. As Emily so aptly describes the protracted adolescence of the contemporary American child, “I felt like a semisolid, like I was melting, or just about to harden.”

Zeidner’s last novel was “Layover.” She directs the MFA program in creative writing at Rutgers University in Camden, N.J.

THE ADULTS

By Alison Espach

Scribner. 307 pp. $25

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