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POET'S CHOICE
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and always the same hard candy
of shame dissolving in my throat;
handing in my apron, returning the cash-
register key. And yet, how fine it feels,
the perversity of freedom which never signs
a rent check or explains anything to one's family.
I've arrived again, taking one more last
walk through another door, thinking " I am
what is wrong with America," while outside
in the emptied, post-rushhour street,
the sun slouches in a tulip tree and the sound
of a neighborhood pool floats up on the heat.
For instance, the comic effect of "found my snood/ unsuitable," somewhat heightened by straddling two lines, also begins a burst of rhyme, with "snood/ Jack/ attitude/ lack." Along with that kind of audible effect, the poem opens multiple possibilities of thought, in rapidly juggled metaphors: "the chain gang of obsessive love" followed immediately by "the same hard candy/ of shame dissolving in my throat." The resonances of overtones and undertones in this kind of writing resemble the sense-perception of the final two lines: the multiple voices of summer play, distinct and choral, rising from the pool. ยท
(Erin Belieu's poem "On Being Fired Again" can be found in her book "One Above & One Below: Poems." Copper Canyon. Copyright 2000 by Erin Belieu.)
Robert Pinsky's most recent book is "The Life of David."




