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of Dewar's. They can't help
but notice the petals, the snow
blowing together in the street.
They chat politely, take salt
from his forehead,
on their lips, as they go
out the door, agreeing
he looks bad. They don't know
the man's floating on
a blue raft, an ocean, a small
Pacific. He's smoking
a pleasant cigarette; it's nice,
lukewarm, no undertow.
The originality of this poem gathers gradually through a series of cool, all-but-detached observations. The Dewar's, the polite chat, the pathetic flatness of words such as "he looks bad" convey the feeling of ordinary life under its extraordinary stresses.
The poem has a cheering quality that might at first be invisible, or mystifying: How can this account of a death from cancer have a kind of smiling, humane element? The answer to that question is in the gift of imagination: in this case, literally a gift, the final scene being given by the poet to the dying man's children, or to us readers. The attempt to think what the morphine sleep might feel like is the poet's version, in art, of the jokes that are part of a funeral or wake in some traditions. The poet's assurance in creating the final scene, as if knowing what cannot really be known, has a gentle irony about its own pretending -- the voice of imagination not denying the harshness of loss, but surviving it. ?
(James Hoch's poem "Morphine" can be found in his book "Miscreants: Poems." Norton. Copyright 2007 by James Hoch.)
Robert Pinsky's most recent book of poetry is "Jersey Rain."




